Time for another post.
Chapter 1 - Piece 2.
“I’m recieving incoming message from the squadron carrier, I’ll share it to you guys.â€Â
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| Author: | Bulska [ Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:35 am ] |
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I have been writing a story for some time now, and I've decided to put it up in these forums. I'm going to put them up in piecies. The story is about the pirate Aniper and his squadron. Written in a way of following Aniper around, but not knowing what he's going to do or what he thinks. I'm going to add up every 2 days, untill I have posted everything I have so far. Chapter 1 - Piece 1. “This is station docking control, Alakhrinr 3, station Ti’yarr. Your squadron is cleared to launch. Good luck out there Aniper!†|
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| Author: | SX [ Sat Mar 01, 2008 8:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Wicked Cool, Bulska! |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
A minor edit of adding the year, date and time into the story. [quote]“Year is 2812, date is 5th of august, time is 7:20 pm. Activating engines, all systems show green. Launching now.†|
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| Author: | Bulska [ Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Time for another post.
Chapter 1 - Piece 2. “I’m recieving incoming message from the squadron carrier, I’ll share it to you guys.†|
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| Author: | SX [ Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Pretty Awesome! |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Thanks
If there is anything wrong spelled or something doesn't fit, please tell so I might edit a few words in a few lines. |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
In the following, not much interresting happens for the story plot. I might add the 4th piece tomorrow already. Chapter 1 - Piece 3. Nuff and Rez scanned the bounty hunter left overs for loot and found some interesting Tachyon equipment. Most of the equipment found were useless such as broken shielding, shattered engine parts and damaged Tachyon weapons, but they did managed to pull some info out of the ships computer. Information is always usefull, knowledge about your enemy is worth alot. “Well, nothing much usefull left for us this time. Lets go, I think Aniper is getting a little impatient.†|
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| Author: | ShadowBlade [ Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
you're pretty good 
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| Author: | Bulska [ Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:57 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Thanks
I haven't wrote much so if I practice more I might write a better story someday. I still got 4 characters left to do ^^ |
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| Author: | SX [ Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Yay Verily for Bulska! |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Here's a drawing featuring the 5 space ships of the pirates. Do note that this is an older drawing and some adjustments should be made. Such as the Ioneer, imagine a gun in its nouse. And the Silight's wingplates should start a bit closer to the cockpit. 
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| Author: | Bulska [ Mon Mar 10, 2008 3:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Delayed because of PC thinking he knows better. |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Last finished piece... I know I'm lazy. Chapter 1. Piece 3. “A jump? I hope this one is more smooth than the last one.†|
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| Author: | SX [ Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Wow!! Rock On! |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:58 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Because of the previous delays. Here is a new part. Chapter 1. Piece 3. Ka’char slowed down and left hyperspace once again. They just warped into the busy traffic line of the Mid-Sector. Mid-Hrinor 7 was a regular mid-sector, with only 92km distance between the two jumpgates and a small Sentinal, an AI controlled gun platform, in the middle. Most mid sectors of the Hrinario colony were about 100km in size. The Jumpgate to Hrinor leaded to the Inner Worlds, which wasn’t too greatly protected next to the Border Worlds. The worlds of the human space were devided in three mayor groups which represent the safety and wealth of those systems. The Core Worlds were almost pirate-free and were very safe to fly trough. At the Core Worlds, there was a very stable ecomony and trade, they were the wealthiest solar systems to be found. Next comes the Inner Worlds, which varies alot in safety. Near the Core Worlds, it’s very safe and there’s no trouble to be found. But near the Border Worlds, where Aniper was hanging around, it’s extremely dangerous. But because of the unstable economy there is alot of money to be made and this draws traders into these more dangerous areas of space. Aniper, Triax, Nuff and Rez were back again in the dull recreational area of the Ka’char. They were sitting around a table, watching the small plasma TV screen at which a few engineers watched TV not very long ago. Suddenly, the show is interrupted by the white Trade Federation symbol infront of a black background. A T and a F placed in each other, with a white circle around it. After the darkness faded and the symbol moved to the upper right corner of the screen, it showed the helmet of a male pilot in one of the easily recognizable Trade Federation cockpits. “This is Trade Federation police patrol, Gamma-6, we are about to scan your cargo hold for contraband, please stand by.†|
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| Author: | SX [ Wed Mar 19, 2008 3:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Mmm... Spaceships. |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Thu May 29, 2008 4:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Some more coming up soon. Had some time to write, I'll see what I can do tomorrow, else, saturday. |
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| Author: | Bulska [ Sat May 31, 2008 4:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Here u go. As usual, daily traffic went in and out of the Jump and catchergates at Hrinor. Nobody would notice a small squadron carrier flying amongst the many transporters, freighters and mercenary fighters. Yet what stood around the jumpgate today wasn’t as usual as always. Not far from the busy traffic lines, a large M&E combat fleet seemed to be waiting for something. The Oiti Manufracturers and Engineers’ never assualt any other faction, neither do they take on the job to patrol. This had to be a convoy, and these were the escorts waiting for the transporters to arrive. By looking at the size of this fleet, it must be a very important trip for the M&E. “Aniper, look outside.†|
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| Author: | Bulska [ Sat May 31, 2008 4:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
“Captain speaking, we’re almost at Ore Haven, only 23 kilometers away. You’ve got to fly that in your fighters, I can’t get there because of the dense asteroid belt.†|
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| Author: | SX [ Sat May 31, 2008 9:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Story] Aniper |
Yay! |
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